Wednesday, December 14, 2005

I remember...

just a memory of the past

I remember back then
when full moon was shining
when tiny stars were sparkling
right above me

I remember back then
when you were there
when I was here
staring at each other
through a purple glass

I remember back then
when dreams were in the air
when heartbeats were inevitable
when thoughts were simple

I remember back then
when feelings were intense
when touches felt like real
simply comforting

I remember back then
when words were almost enough
when a blow of kiss was almost blinding
when a whisper heated all senses
when promises were almost true

Back then…
just before anger took over
calmness slipped away
patience reached an edge
pains gripped the heart
just before….
I sent you away


Carla said...

Is this about what I think it is?
Is it over?

RinAku said...

Nope, it's not. It's about something else. Just an old story.

Antonio said...

It's nice...which ever past it refers to.

RinAku said...

Thank You :)

Whoami said...

I really like this. So rhythmic and soothing I really feel like I am in the arms of my mother who is rocking me gently to sleep. I remember... Great poem.